This week, something from James and Lucy's wedding night. Lucy's nerves are at war with her desires:
Freeing her hair was not the work of an instant, and Lucy was captured in the circle of his arms as James gently, carefully unwound the braid. His breath was warm against her neck, and after a tense moment she sighed and rested her cheek against his. Her nerves seemed heightened somehow; she was exquisitely aware of the contrast between the skin along his cheekbones, almost as soft as her own, and the faint rasp of beard stubble too short to see.
Still unbraiding her hair, James rested his face more closely against hers, then drew back to nuzzle her, nose to nose, and kiss her again. It was a gentle yet probing kiss, their tongues in a sort of leisurely, playful duel, and it did not end until he leaned back to fan her long hair around her, running his fingers through it.
“I’ve been wanting to do this since the day I met you,” he said.
As always, comments are welcome, and stop by the Six Sunday mothership for links to other authors' posts. Also, my blog tour for this book just started, and I'm giving away two copies this weekend. Stop by Romancing the Past to read a longer excerpt or by Risky Regencies, where I talk about my inspiration for the story and what makes A Marriage of Inconvenience a risky book. Leave a comment at either or both for a chance to win.
I think one of the things that is so beautiful about your writing is the way that you can build up tension using simple things. Undoing her hair becomes this hot intense romantic moment. Really, really incredibly well done.
ReplyDeleteSuch a perfect scene. I second Rebecca's comment. Incredibly well done.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Happy release day tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. Love the description. Happy release day eve!
ReplyDeleteLovely scene, the desire is restrained yet leaps off the page
ReplyDeletelovely and very well done.
ReplyDeleteVery intense. I wish my first wedding night had had some of that passion!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful description. What a seduction snippet. Happy release day.
ReplyDeleteas a novice writer I learn from the more seasoned writers - thank you -
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written six. So much emotion in so few sentences.
ReplyDeleteAnother great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful description, very tender, very emotional. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteA lot of nice, barely restrained passion in those six sentences. I like it.
ReplyDeleteI grew up wanting long hair because I was reading scenes like this.. Wonderful, romantic, and uncomplicated.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sweet, intimate moment. Sigh.
ReplyDeleteGreat description. Wishing you a great release day!
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely description, full of rich detail both sensory and emotional.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful description. Thank you for sharing with us.
ReplyDeleteLove the intimacy you created. Congrats on your release day!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and initmate. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteVery, very nice. :)
ReplyDeleteSweet and tender. Perfect!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful. Don't know why, but scenes of men enjoying a woman's hair has always been some of my favorites.
ReplyDeleteAmazingly sweet.
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