In honor of my new Regency historical, A Marriage of Inconvenience, which comes out April 11 from Carina Press, I'm posting the first six sentences:
“Marry you?” Lucy stared open-mouthed at her cousin Sebastian for a long moment before she remembered that she must always be ladylike and self-controlled. She closed her mouth and looked down at her clasped hands. She could not stop her heart from trying to gallop its way out of her chest, but she could and did force herself to breathe slowly and steadily.
This was the very thing she had always wanted most, the thing she would have dreamed of had she permitted herself dreams. It could not possibly be real.
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Great six, Susanna! Last week was my first time.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Great opening six!
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Excellent six sentences!
ReplyDeleteOhhhh, hot! Btw, love the cover, it is sooooo pretty!
ReplyDeleteGreat opening!
ReplyDeletelol loved your six! Congrats on the upcoming release!
ReplyDeleteExcellent 6Sentences and I love that cover!
ReplyDeleteThat is a great opening!
ReplyDeleteIf it's too good to be true... uh oh! Great opener, and love that cover too. Congrats on your release!
ReplyDeleteNIce! Very intriguing!
ReplyDeleteI'm so thrilled you have another book coming out!! Great Six!
ReplyDeleteFabulous six to start your book! I hope you'll share more.
ReplyDeleteWow! Well, I am sure her perspective is going to change! lol! great six!
ReplyDeleteGreat cover.
ReplyDeleteMy next part would be: "And there has to be a catch" because there always is.
Great Six, Congrats and good luck.
Oh, there's definitely a catch--the guy in this scene is NOT in fact the hero. :)
ReplyDeleteAww! What a nice six. You can really feel how happy she is.
ReplyDeleteI love the image you paint with the horse reference. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Six Sentence Sunday, Susanna! Nice debut. Love Regencies; love marriages of convenience. LOVE your cover. Carina Press artists outdo themselves again!
ReplyDeleteOh oh, Things never go well in a Regency when she thinks she getting what she always wanted.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Sunday Six! Love your snippet. And your cover is GORGEOUS! Congrats :)
ReplyDeleteGreat to welcome a newbie like myself this week! Very nicely done six.
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welcome - I just started last week here - and glad to hear he not the hero !
ReplyDeleteLoved the six and the cover is beautiful
ReplyDeleteBeautiful cover and great opening lines. Congratulations on your Carina release!
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Whew. I got worried about the cousin thing :) Congrats on the upcoming release!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to SSS. :) Congrats on your upcoming launch! And I'm glad to hear that her cousin is not really the hero! LOL Great six!
ReplyDeleteHmm...intriguing...wonder what makes her dream man "inconvenient"? Congrats on the upcoming release!
ReplyDeleteGood opening. :)
ReplyDeleteWelcome to SSS! Great six, and great character name ;)
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