“So, brother,” she said with unconvincing casualness, “what’s the trouble between you and Miss Jones?”
“Nothing,” he said. “She’s a very sweet girl.” Now, that was damning with faint praise. The more he knew Lucy Jones, the less he would describe her as anything so insipid as “sweet.” No, her flavor was sharp and complex, with the faint bitterness of fine wine.
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